wow that's really well done I hope you win very nice work

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go here its soooooo funny [link]

thanks for saying that!

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Nice work! Good luck in the contest!

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Here is the critique you requested.

There over all layout seems good to me but I think there is some contrast issues as well as some color issues. The contrast could be stronger and the blue of the BG is really fighting with your figures so by desaturating the BG a bit or saturating them would help them stand out better. While I get the idea of the fame of the product is suppose to be like warming them up I am not really sure what the product is. I think it is some kind of toiletry but it could also be some kind of liquor which works with the theme better. If it is a toiletry is a cologne or a perfume, this would be a good thing to add in the text, like "for men or women".

Hope that helps.

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Thanks it relly does!

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I like this one .

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Its a studio photo, does it look real?

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It looks real, but in post processing you added a bit more blue colour. It maybe is the effect you wanted to achieve, but I personally don't like it too much x).

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ok good to know thanks for the comment!

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